Editing 2910: The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald
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:The ship was the pride | :The ship was the pride | ||
:of the American side | :of the American side | ||
− | + | :It was due to set | |
− | + | :sail for Cleveland | |
:As the big freighters go, | :As the big freighters go, | ||
:it was bigger than most | :it was bigger than most | ||
− | + | :With a crew and good | |
− | + | :captain well seasoned | |
:[Zoom on Cueball facing to his right, still holding the guitar, without the pier, water, and seagulls. A pair of connected eighth notes to his right, a half note and a detached eighth note to his left.] | :[Zoom on Cueball facing to his right, still holding the guitar, without the pier, water, and seagulls. A pair of connected eighth notes to his right, a half note and a detached eighth note to his left.] | ||
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:But taking a walk on | :But taking a walk on | ||
:the shore by the dock | :the shore by the dock | ||
− | + | :Was a songwriter named | |
− | + | :Gordon Lightfoot | |
:He was humming a tune | :He was humming a tune | ||
:but it didn't have words | :but it didn't have words | ||
− | + | :For it's challenging | |
− | + | :trying to write good | |
:[Close-up on Cueball's face. A quarter note and a pair of connected eighth notes to his right, a detached eighth note and a quarter note to his left.] | :[Close-up on Cueball's face. A quarter note and a pair of connected eighth notes to his right, a detached eighth note and a quarter note to his left.] | ||
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:Poor Gordon sought glory | :Poor Gordon sought glory | ||
:but needed a story | :but needed a story | ||
− | + | :His career in folk | |
− | + | :music imperiled | |
:He mulled over this as | :He mulled over this as | ||
:he watched them do work | :he watched them do work | ||
− | + | :On the hull of the | |
− | + | :''Edmund Fitzgerald'' | |
:[Zoom back to second panel. Cueball is now facing to his left. A pair of connected eighth notes to Cueball's right, a separated eighth note and a pair of connected eighth notes to his left.] | :[Zoom back to second panel. Cueball is now facing to his left. A pair of connected eighth notes to Cueball's right, a separated eighth note and a pair of connected eighth notes to his left.] | ||
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:Perhaps it was wrong, | :Perhaps it was wrong, | ||
:what he did for a song | :what he did for a song | ||
− | + | :He should never have | |
− | + | :bribed that mechanic | |
:But his maritime crimes | :But his maritime crimes | ||
:are no worse than the time | :are no worse than the time | ||
− | + | :Young James Cameron | |
− | + | :sank the ''Titanic'' | |
{{comic discussion}} | {{comic discussion}} |