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The third paragraph sounds awkward to me, and I couldn't figure out anything to do about it. Could somebody fix that, please? [[User:Kyt|Kyt]] ([[User talk:Kyt|talk]]) 03:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | The third paragraph sounds awkward to me, and I couldn't figure out anything to do about it. Could somebody fix that, please? [[User:Kyt|Kyt]] ([[User talk:Kyt|talk]]) 03:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
+ | Had a crack, not sure its any less awkward, but it is more balanced [[User:Plm-qaz snr|Plm-qaz snr]] ([[User talk:Plm-qaz snr|talk]]) 10:21, 17 August 2014 (UTC) |
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The third paragraph sounds awkward to me, and I couldn't figure out anything to do about it. Could somebody fix that, please? Kyt (talk) 03:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC) Had a crack, not sure its any less awkward, but it is more balanced Plm-qaz snr (talk) 10:21, 17 August 2014 (UTC)