Editing 266: Choices: Part 3
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:Megan (thinking): I should feel scared. | :Megan (thinking): I should feel scared. | ||
− | :[She falls from the top of the bubble, the bubble rises | + | :[She falls from the top of the bubble, the bubble rises or both.] |
:Megan (thinking): But I don't. | :Megan (thinking): But I don't. | ||
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:[Beat panel, where Megan just floats in her bubble on the same background, but in a smaller panel.] | :[Beat panel, where Megan just floats in her bubble on the same background, but in a smaller panel.] | ||
− | :[A large panel where | + | :[A large panel where Many distorted copies of Megan whirl around the original Megan in her bubble; She also bends backwards. The stars and light display in the background is more clear around her bubble, that now creates a lens effect, that even distorts the distorted Megans even more. Around her bubbles edge and the lens edge there are three places where brown lines appear on both these edges.] |
− | :[All the copies have disappeared except for one who is hanging suspended outside Megan in her bubble. The new one is almost a mirror image, but not quite. The background is more dark blue, with | + | :[All the copies have disappeared except for one who is hanging suspended outside Megan in her bubble. The new one is almost a mirror image, but not quite. The background is more dark blue, with less features.] |
− | :[The Megan copy raises her hand and speaks. There are again more stars in the background.] | + | :[The Megan copy raises her hand and speaks. There are again more stars etc. in the background.] |
:Megan copy: Sorry — hi, me. | :Megan copy: Sorry — hi, me. | ||
:Megan: ...Hi. | :Megan: ...Hi. |