Editing 2876: Range Safety
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:Voice: There are reports of thunderstorms in the downrange area. | :Voice: There are reports of thunderstorms in the downrange area. | ||
β | :[Same scene, except there are now only two | + | :[Same scene, except there are now only two birds, both flying on the left side of the rocket.] |
:Voice: The Range Safety Officer has ordered a launch hold. | :Voice: The Range Safety Officer has ordered a launch hold. | ||
β | :[Almost same scene, but panned to the right so the smallest building to the left is not shown and a third building to the right of the other two buildings can be seen. | + | :[Almost same scene, but panned to the right so the smallest building to the left is not shown and a third building to the right of the other two buildings can be seen. The birds are now flying with one on either side of the rocket. Two voices are now emanating from the middle building.] |
:Voice: But the Range '''''Danger''''' Officer wants to launch the rocket toward the biggest thunderstorm. | :Voice: But the Range '''''Danger''''' Officer wants to launch the rocket toward the biggest thunderstorm. | ||
:Voice 2: Okay, why do we even '''''have''''' that position? | :Voice 2: Okay, why do we even '''''have''''' that position? |